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Why can't it be you?
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Why can't it be you? |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Why can't it be you that holds me tonight that whips away my tears and takes away my fright Why can't it be you the one that loves me tells me I'm the one that was meant for you Why can't it be you the one I see in the morning the one who brings me flowers and writes me little notes of love I wan't it to be you but you won't think of me like I think of you I could make you so happy you would make me so happy Love works in mysterious ways never appears when you want it surprises you at the wrong times and can make your life worse Why can't you love me like I love you why can't you hold me when I cry why can't you bring me flowers why can't it be you? |
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dimpleface123 New Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 1 |
i really like your poem..its so meaningful and you could relate reality to it..hehe.. |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks a lot for your reply dimple, I'm glad you could really relate to my poem. Thanks again!smiles  poe  |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ah, I know this feeling well. Hang in there. Great writing. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks LoveBug for your reply, I'm glad to know that there is support out there. Thanks again!!!!smiles poe |
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Matchstick McGee Junior Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 26Austin, Texas |
Ah, the ache of unrequited love... beautifully expressed. I know how it feels. -Matchstick |
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