I need a title for this so please help me!!!

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Teen Poetry #2

I need a title for this so please help me!!!

Dina
Junior Member

since 2000-05-20

Posts 10

0 posted 2000-05-24 10:49 PM

As I look in your eyes
I finally realize how much I care.
Even through all my lies,
You were always there.

I can't get the courage to tell you,
How much you mean to me.
For I fear I will lose you,
And hurt will I be.

As I prepare to tell you how I feel,
Excited and scared at the same time.
I look in your eyes and see how real
I want to make to make you mine.

Through all these years,
I knew this was true
I had no more fears,
So I told you "I love you".

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-05-25 01:06 AM

This is good...you've got a recurring theme of 'in your eyes'..maybe that could be the title..?

Blondie69
Junior Member

since 2000-05-20

Posts 13

2 posted 2000-05-27 06:10 PM

hey, thast was a really good poem and i can relate to it. good job

Emily Williams
New Member

since 2000-05-23

Posts 5

3 posted 2000-05-27 06:47 PM

I think a good title would be "What is it that I see In Your Eyes?"

mickel2995
Junior Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 48

4 posted 2000-05-27 11:38 PM

Loved it! Possibly the title could be: Three Little Words. Nice.

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