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Goodbye Shane
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Goodbye Shane |
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the dark angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 37 |
-x- This poem is dedicated to the memory of Shane Durham 1st November 1984- 20th May 2000. God rest his soul and may he rest in peace. Shane was a good friend of mine and something inside of me died when he did. This poem is just about saying goodbye-x- Today a bit of my soul died as my good friend Shane is no longer alive He shared his love with me and now he is gone I really miss him but life must go on He got drunk on a friday night he and his friends took out a car and set off on a joy ride The car crashed and Shane died first before the car into flames burst His friends got out but left him in incased in fire His soft hair singed Today was a madhouse the whole year was crying as they heard of his dying. I was among them and my broken heart was sighing He was only 15 and his own stupidity took him away So this lesson I teach to you on this very day Never get in a car when the driver's not okay If she's been drinking or he's taken drugs just don't do it cus I don't wanna lose one of us |
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aussie_princesss Junior Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 15Australia |
Dark Angel This is a good poem i had a friend died the same way a few weeks ago. Your poem says it all. Dont get into a car when somebody has been drinking. |
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aussie_princesss Junior Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 15Australia |
Dark Angel This is a good poem i had a friend died the same way a few weeks ago. Your poem says it all. Dont get into a car when somebody has been drinking. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
A truely sad place it is we live in when so many people can personally relate to this...i too lost friends in this manner, its such a waste, i dont cry alot, but this...this was too much. Well, maybe it will help you to think that his life was made into the ultimate example, i hope that you or any of your friends never repeat this horrible mistake. Its not much, but hey, someguy tried it on me! Very vivid poem, drew alot of emotion from me, life's a road, one thats often bumpy. this is just a really really really really big bump. Hey, i have been through this before, so if you need to talk, we'll you know how to geta hold of me. |
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