Teen Poetry #2 |
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Love |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Love is like a tree, Only as strong as its roots are deep. When love is lost, It falls, scatters like leaves. A force as mysterious and as stron as the wind, Can cause love to change its course. Your love can get buried, Like leaves under snow. But you know the leaves will return, Although your love may never. Tree will find new leaves, And you a new love. But the trees remain the same, And your love will never again. "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do." "The role of a writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin "Follow your own heart, not others." |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Yeah, its love alright... hey chickie! Yeah that about sums up love in my experience. Love, is who ya know...hehe. anyway, the short stanzas are quite effective, keep it up. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
yep, short.. sweet.. very effective. ^_^ Lynne |
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Blondie69 Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 13 |
hey that was really good |
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