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KiLeZ
New Member

since 2000-05-20

Posts 8

0 posted 2000-05-20 03:40 AM

**This is a poem about my confusing feelings for my ex. ITs kind of dumb but im new at this

~!*I Can't Let Go*!~

Why do I still have feelings for you?
Why do I feel the way I do?

You were so wrong to me,
So i ended "us" finally.

You were so mad, you said I was making a huge mistake,
Thats when I realized that you are just a fake.

You wouldn't let go, I was so lost by your touch,
How in the world could I allow myself to love you this much??

I was niave for falling for your game,
Little did I know that it would bring this much pain.

I miss you more and more everyday,
and when we talk I suddenly have nothing to say.

I'll never forget the times when we were together,
for I'll keep those memories locked in my heart forever.

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

1 posted 2000-05-20 03:48 AM

Naw, its not dumb...

It makes more sense then what i write! I understand where your comming from dude, my suggestion (i dont even listen to myself, so you shouldn't either) unless there is any chance of getting back together FORGET HER, there are plenty where she came from, yeah that sounds pretty bad, but we're young and supposed to be experimenting!!!!!

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KiLeZ
New Member

since 2000-05-20

Posts 8

2 posted 2000-05-20 04:00 AM

Forget her? LOL hun im a girl ;-) So you must mean forget HIM. KiLeZ is just my nickname, it's short for Kiley, my real name ;-)

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

3 posted 2000-05-20 09:53 AM

DUMB?? i think not! no seriously this poem is awesome and i love it! so dont cut urself down ne more okay??

ashley

"Falling in love is just that - falling.
Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe.
Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees.
But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die."

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

4 posted 2000-05-21 08:20 PM

This is nice poetry Kiley.. not in the least bit dumb.. it talks.. hehe.. talks heaps.. ^_^

Great work..
Lynne

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