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Cyndol Claycamp
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since 2000-05-17
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0 posted 2000-05-18 02:10 PM


Death

He stays and lurks within the dark waiting.
Though every once in a while he comes out and causes pain.
As though only to help.
Then he comes out again only to cause pain.
They say he makes you see black and become ice cold.
But I say that he comes to save you from the pain.
He comes to knock on your door more then once
But only once is he answeard.
After you open the door he comes right on in
to Wisk you right away.
He tries to confer you in your pain and takes you away.
While leaving loved ones behind.
Some he takes are old that he takes proud
but the young ones he takes in sorrow.
He takes all who suffer.
So don’t blame him for your pain only remember he took them from their pain to a place where there is none.



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1 posted 2000-05-18 03:23 PM


This is truely a beautiful poem. Thank you for reminding us that death isn't really such a terrible thing.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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