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since 1999-07-17
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0 posted 2000-05-17 11:31 PM

Love Is Now Gone
Im Still in love, but we have both moved on
The love I thought would never end is now gone

I think of her every night as I sleep,
I still stay awake, restless as I weep.

I cannot call her, I cannot be around,
Anywhere I am, she is now no longer to be found.

I miss her soo much, yet now I am sure,
The love she had for me, was never once pure,

Thats alright, they say life is hard,
You have to just play the hand, card by card.

I have lost this hand, but live for the next deal,
Now I know, I can never show someone exactly how I feel.

As soon as you show it, your out of luck,
Your heart is held, should I say just plain stuck.

I thought I had found my one true love, but no,
My heart took it all, the swift hard blow.

I will go one and find someone new,
But to her, In my heart I will always have a place for you.

 "A Love Found Brings A Smile, But The Lost Lost Only Brings Pain"

© Copyright 2000 Jimmy VanNatta - All Rights Reserved
Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
1 posted 2000-05-18 02:09 AM

Hehehehe, ya posted twice! ^_^
mm, well, I love this one too.. *_^ posted twice.. hmm, does that mean it is twice as good? j / k .. hehe


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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-05-18 06:05 AM

This is very well written and I have to say, I really think you have a good attitude toward it.

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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