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Teen Poetry #2

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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-05-17 05:58 PM

What if I die tomorrow,
Could you ever forget me?

I am everything to you,
Your best friend, you lover, Me.
I am everything I try,
Your shoulder to cry upon.

What if you die tomorrow,
Could I ever forget you?

You are everything to me,
My best friend, my lover, You.
You are everything you try,
My shoulder to cry upon.

What if she dies tomorrow,
Could he ever forget her?

She is everything to him,
His best friend, his lover, Her.
She is everything she tries,
His should to cry upon.

What if he dies tomorrow,
Could she ever forget him?

He is everything to her,
Her best friend, her lover, Him.
He is everything he tried,
Her shoulder to cry upon.

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

1 posted 2000-05-17 06:22 PM

Tamma, enjoyed reading this poem. Glad to see you posting more of your poems. Know you have been busy with graduation and summer plans. Hope you write more poetry.
This is sort of sad and dark, about that lover's triangle that always leaves someone hurting.
hope all is well with you
dh

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

2 posted 2000-05-18 08:52 AM

Hi Tamma, your poem is very good...a good description of a love triangle.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Daysleeper
Member

since 2000-04-23

Posts 119

3 posted 2000-05-19 08:50 PM

Hey Tamma... you know what? This would make a fantastic song! I'm serious... if you've ever at all thought about setting your poetry to music, start with this here. It's great! It's already got a chorus, it's got the perfect rythm and flow and beat to be a song... Wow...

*getting out my gutiar and plucking away.* Keep writing!

...Daysleeper...

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