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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
a penny for the thoughts and a million for the mind a man without depression .. is always hard to find some would rather melt a plastic face.. not quite so ugly i know..but it will pass for disgrace as you appear..in the words..in the fear can you admit..under god's swallowing eye.. your the worse thing going... you need to mourn your life away.. already we're bored...of the pretty in you but we must smile..and shake your hand our hidden agenda..is the law of the land "you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything" "so impressed with all you do..tried so hard to be like you..flew too high and burnt the wing..lost my faith in everything" The Jackal |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
A penny for the thoughts and a million for the mind great way to start the poem, I liked it. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
Beautiful, I really liked it Crystal "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all." It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence. Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen. I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I think is a very deep poem....very well written. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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