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I lay my head apon my desk
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I lay my head apon my desk |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
I lay my head apon my desk Head in arms, I make a nest I seem to lay my soul to rest Each time I think of you I feel like I can almost fly When I stare into thine eyes From my mouth escapes a sigh... I know this love is true She came to me just like a dove Someone to save me from above And now I have someone to love A love long overdue... Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
AH! I'm going mad trying to keep up with this place, post after post! Well, the moderators wanted some action, well they got it... Nice Lucius! Love is an awsome experience...just remember to have fun, cause...thats what being a teenager is all about! Deranger, ------------------------ Yo soy sandwich de tomote y lechuga! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ah, it's always wonderful to find love... a beautiful poem. I enjoyed it a lot. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Thanks guys, I know its tough to reply when the boards are busy like this, I have tried my best to too. And thanks deranger for the advice, I need to remember to kick back and have a little fun. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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brendon2k Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 38none |
Great poem Jesse, I enjoyed this one alot, perhaps even one of the best that i have read of yours so far. Very deep and emotional. Love it! |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
"Love is a grand and a beautiful thing" This is a lovely poem about a wonderful feeling! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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