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Another "Get to know me poem"!
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Another "Get to know me poem"! |
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the dark angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 37 |
*** Just a few notes for anyone who doesn't understand some of this. A greebo is a girl who listens to rock music and dresses in baggy jeans and tight tops. All makeup and accesories are very bright and childish!**** You never really knew me you didn't give a stuff you just wanted me on your side to make you seem more tough I was always different a hippy/goth/greebo but all you'd do was tease me sometimes I didn't even know I sometimes want to kill you the rest I love you to death but none of you really care for me cus I was different from the rest One day tenderness will rule the world and then you all will see how we all are different and how you patronised me Just becuase I love to smile and listen to rock and roll I was a halfbreed hippy-greebo This whole world is a mixing bowl! One day tenderness will rule the world and then you all will wish how you hadn't patronised me in the worlds great serving dish |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful poem. I hate when people try to categorize each other... good work on the poem. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Ana Junior Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 16iLLINOIs |
I really enjoyed your poem. I get made fun of a lot because I am so short...A junior and the second smallest kid in the school...so I kind of understand what you mean. Very good work! **Ana** |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Let me get something off right away...Screw "labeling people"! Ok, now thats taken care of... Yes, the infamious "Get to know me poem" strikes again!!! This poem is a vivid look into you life, thanks for sharing Remember to be yourself, in the end, thats all that really matters... --------------------------- Mi amiga escuches musica de rock n' roll! [This message has been edited by Deranger (edited 05-16-2000).] |
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Daysleeper Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 119 |
I really love this! I love what you've written, and how you think of yourself. This is excellent. I think you've inspired me to write another one of these as well... It's hard to 'get to know' a person with only one poem... Back to the notebook for me. ...Daysleeper... "We prefer to do things comfortably" said the Controller. "But I don't want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin." "In fact," said Mustapha Mond, "you're claiming the right to be unhappy." "Alright then," said the Savage defiantly, "I'm claiming the right to be unhappy." -Aldous Huxley "Brave New World" |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
This was a great poem. I really liked the line "This whole world is a mixing bowl!" <it's so true Keep up the good word!!!  (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a wonderful poem....illustrates so clearly what I believe: Categorizing people sux! We ain't books in no library!! Great poem!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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