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Frosty
Junior Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-05-15 10:35 PM


Funny how you come to me now
After you claim not to know me
You pretend I inflict pain upon you
Yet you know it was you
But I'll help you
I love you

Even when you curse me for hours on end
And never even talk to me
I'm just your tool
To get you out of messes
But I'll help you
I love you

You use me, and I pretend not to notice
I see you naked in the garden
I saw you breaking 1-10
It'll be okay
I'll help you
I love you

I hold you, carry you
But now, your dying
And you don't find it a blessing
To spend time with me
But I'll help you
I love you

Why won't you listen
And accept my gift to you
Now you call upon me
To pull you out of the gutters
I'll help you
I love you

You are my child
And of your entire existence
You are a teenager
Grow up and come with me
Let me help you
I love you

Let us live together in heaven
I am God
And now you come to me
I'll take you to paradise
This is your help
Because I love you


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Vball Chickie1624
Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116
New York
1 posted 2000-05-15 10:42 PM


very beautiful poem.  keep writing!

- Danielle


 "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do."

"The role of a writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say."
- Anais Nin

"Follow your own heart, not others."



Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
2 posted 2000-05-15 10:45 PM


Welcome, and keep writing such nice work  

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


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