navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #2 » I Confess
Teen Poetry #2
Post A Reply Post New Topic I Confess Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~

0 posted 2000-05-15 02:22 AM


Tonight was the first night you ever came out, and told me exactly how you feel
Baby, it was so nice, and it made what we have seem much more real
I have been trapped in this east world of hell trying to fight all of the pain that people like to cause
I am trying to get out of it, but this distance thing has put us on a heartaching two year pause
I want you to hold me in your arms for the first time in a year
Jayson, I want you to hug away all of this dreaded fear
I need someone who I can trust
Someone who is about more than just lust
Someone who will love me for who I am
Not someone who will put me in a jam
I am sick of being hurt by just a meaningful being
But most of all it hurts the most by those, when you are left by someone fleeing
I want the two of us to be equal, not just one by a word as mere as control
We have to be on an equal level, not as one who will always be on patrol
I need someone to love me, to care for  me, and most importantly someone who will protect me
I am falling in love with you, and all I want is for you and I to be
You soft voice, gentle touch, and beautiful smile will always distract my mind
No matter what happens I know you will never out me in a bind
Whether it be friendship or love, you will always be in my heart
But for now, we have a second chance to have a fresh new start
A chance to be truthful, and a chance to be committed to only each other
All I want you to know, is that there will never again be another
You are first from here on in
No more shall I sin
I want to love you with all the love that I can give
We will soon be together baby, and we will finally continue to live


Trust me, I'm getting there.   I promise I will love you with all of my heart, body, and soul. I promise to put MY ALL into our upcoming relationship. You are everything I have ever dreamed of. Everything I have ever wished for. Everything I have needed. Best of all, everything I WANT. We're meant for each other, and we shall be together. Always yours forever, Stephani <3<3<3



 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


© Copyright 2000 Stephani Ann - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-05-15 11:35 AM


Sounds like you have poured your heart into this one.....wishing you the best......
no greater motivator for good poetry than true love..
dh

Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
2 posted 2000-05-15 12:08 PM


I wrote it. I posted it. Then had him read it. Everything is going to be great  

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
3 posted 2000-05-15 06:41 PM




Second chances rarely come in our fast paced world, but i glad to see someone gets them!  Great poem, hope you and Jayson work out.

Deranger

Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
4 posted 2000-05-15 07:57 PM


Thank you So much. I live in MA, and he is all the way across the country in CA. He moved there last year. I have to finish school here, and then I'm moving out there to be with him.

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


LoveBug
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697

5 posted 2000-05-15 10:06 PM


We all make mistakes, but if you love enough, those mistakes are easily forgiven. A wonderful poem, and I hope everything works out!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
6 posted 2000-05-15 10:37 PM


Thanks again! The whole second chance wasn't that I had cheated on him. I was caught between two people. One who loved me, and one who I loved. Now the one I did love is just a blur in my mind, and the one who loved me, STILL loves me. He is willing to try again, and I am willing to make it work.   That is why he is so special.

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #2 » I Confess

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary