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Such a tiny hole....
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Such a tiny hole.... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
handle me with care they say... i was broken...sanity has spoken and arent you glad ..you painted me this way? must not mind..the sound of decay and the question goes...how does such a tiny hole suck out whats left of me.. and leave you absent..but ALWAYS in control "you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything" "so impressed with all you do..tried so hard to be like you..flew too high and burnt the wing..lost my faith in everything" The Jackal |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
That is quite a powerful poem and it certainly says alot. Good work. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Daysleeper Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 119 |
Very nice! I don't know how this poem got down so far with only one reply, but I love it. Very important poem about the dangers of the spoken word, and it's possibly destructive effect on people's every day lives. ...Daysleeper... |
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