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brendon2k
Junior Member

since 2000-05-11

Posts 38
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0 posted 2000-05-11 01:37 AM

is it time to all start over again,
yet i'm still not quite sure where to begin,
i'm stuck on replay in this stage called regret,
but all these years gone by seems to hard to forget,
and now it;s much to hard to say goodbye,
but over all this time that i've wondered why,
all this pain that i've kept so long,
i'm in need of somewhere to belong,
to walk away from all of this,
but this is something i won't miss,
it seems so hard starting over again,
is this even the right place to begin,
is it time to start over again,
yet i'm still not quite sure where to begin,
i'm stuck on replay in this stage called regret,
but all these years gone by seems to hard to forget,
and now it;s much to hard to say goodbye,
but over all this time that i've wondered why,
all this pain that i've kept so long,
i'm in need of somewhere to belong,
to walk away from all of this,
but this is something i won't miss,
it seems so hard starting over again,
is this even the right place to begin,
all these nights i've spent lying up at home,
and every night i haven't felt so alone,
all i've kept inside, got the best of me,
after all this time, i can say that i believe,
that the stars don't stop with a heatbeat,
and all this pain i've kept so long,
i can finaly say that i belong,
and i walked away from this,
yet this is something i still miss

Lucius Cade
Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 235
Saskatchewan

1 posted 2000-05-11 01:49 AM

hi brendon, welcome to passions,
Wicked like your poem, especially

"all these nights i've spent lying up at home, a
nd every night i haven't felt so alone,
all i've kept inside, got the best of me, after all this time, i can say that i believe,
that the stars don't stop with a heatbeat,"

Lucidity is the answer to all problems

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

2 posted 2000-05-11 03:17 PM

A wonderful poem, but so sad. Welcome to Passions! I really enjoyed your poem, and I'll be looking for more of your work soon!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

3 posted 2000-05-11 05:55 PM

Sup brendon!

Really love the poem (well, lyrics)! Really sad though, but dont forget that the rain always brings sunshine.

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