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tawny
Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 14


0 posted 2000-05-10 11:12 PM


Gutters

A little girl sits
on the edge of the sidewalk
the day after the rain,
trailing feet in gutter rivers.

Watching paper sailboats
getting sucked
down.

The worms crawl over her toes
and curl up
so afraid
in the palm of her hand.

Everything shiny and new,
smelling of clean dreams
and pinky-swear promises.

The sun rises,
leaving the sidewalk
hot and uncomfortable
under her feet.

A little girl sits
on the porch steps,
looking at the sky and
waiting for the rain.


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anonymousfemale
Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
1 posted 2000-05-11 12:51 PM


Tawny: A nice, light piece. I will be looking forward to reading more of your work.

~AF~

 "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry


Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
2 posted 2000-05-11 02:01 AM


That was refreshing...this forum (no offense guys) is always so morbid (yes, i am partly responsible for that), it is nice to see a wonderfully done lighter piece.
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