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since 2000-05-02
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0 posted 2000-05-04 06:13 PM

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The very first day I saw you,
I knew we were meant to be,
And I knew I had to have you,
For the rest of eternity.
The glittering sparkle in your eyes,
Shimmering brighter than all the stars in the sky,
Luminates my heart with ecstasy,
Like a bright light in complete darkness.
The comforting smile you flash at me,
Lifts my pensive heart into bliss,
And whenever I'm around you,
My life is consumate.
You bring ebuillience to my life,
Like a rainbow through the storm;
You keep me in euphoria,
Like a candle that never burns.
We should be together forever,
In our own intangible fantasy,
Lovers, like Romeo and Juliet,
Whose hearts will always yearn. *

© Copyright 2000 Carly - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-05-10 11:13 AM

Very expressive poem you have written here.  Hope that person turns out to be everything you are hoping for.
~~nice writing~~

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2 posted 2000-05-10 03:56 PM

I know this feeling very well... good job on the poem!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

since 2000-05-10
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Somewhere, between here and there
3 posted 2000-05-10 06:21 PM

Love is many things.  Unfortunately, one of those things is tragic, i hope you find what you seek. But i ask you also not to forget what happened to Romeo and Juliet.  
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4 posted 2000-05-10 11:20 PM

I too have known the euphoric feeling of newly blooming love...wonderful poem, keep up the great work!

 *Krista Knutson*

"Lonliness is the human condition."
*Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"*

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since 2000-05-02
Posts 19
Key West
5 posted 2000-05-11 01:28 PM

Danny- tnx, I hope so too. lol  

Love Bug- thank you..I hope to keep writing more poems in the future  

Deranger- tnx &, unfortuantly, I am reminded of Romeo & Juliet every day (note my alias), but one can only hope that everything will be all right. is such a wonderful gift, isn't it?    

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