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*~Intangible Fantasy~* |
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*~Juliet~* Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 19Key West |
<img src="http://netpoets.net/img/ms05.gif"> The very first day I saw you, I knew we were meant to be, And I knew I had to have you, For the rest of eternity. The glittering sparkle in your eyes, Shimmering brighter than all the stars in the sky, Luminates my heart with ecstasy, Like a bright light in complete darkness. The comforting smile you flash at me, Lifts my pensive heart into bliss, And whenever I'm around you, My life is consumate. You bring ebuillience to my life, Like a rainbow through the storm; You keep me in euphoria, Like a candle that never burns. We should be together forever, In our own intangible fantasy, Lovers, like Romeo and Juliet, Whose hearts will always yearn. * |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very expressive poem you have written here. Hope that person turns out to be everything you are hoping for. ~~nice writing~~ |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I know this feeling very well... good job on the poem! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Love is many things. Unfortunately, one of those things is tragic, i hope you find what you seek. But i ask you also not to forget what happened to Romeo and Juliet. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I too have known the euphoric feeling of newly blooming love...wonderful poem, keep up the great work! *Krista Knutson* "Lonliness is the human condition." *Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"* |
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*~Juliet~* Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 19Key West |
Danny- tnx, I hope so too. lol  Love Bug- thank you..I hope to keep writing more poems in the future Deranger- tnx &, unfortuantly, I am reminded of Romeo & Juliet every day (note my alias), but one can only hope that everything will be all right. Krista-tnx...love is such a wonderful gift, isn't it? |
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