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tawny Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 14 |
An original individual born into a recycled world. Growing up. Blinded by monotony, and hiding who she really is. How strange, living after the death of ideas. A sensitive soul recieving negative emotions strives to be strong. Erecting a wall covered with words like happy and laughter and smile. Real, unusual, and unfound love. Words hiding behind. Someone reaching out to her, another lonely soul. A strong hand reaching around a wall covered with words. A soul with eyes that see. She smiled when he gave her his words. Thoughts keep thinking, not hearing her cries of warning. Restrained to long. Breaking free. Crashing through monotony. How strange Finding someone like you. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's always a freeing experence to find someone you relate to. A wonderful job! Welcome to Passions. I hope to see more from you! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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brendon2k Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 38none |
Great poem. I enjoyed how you put it together, very touching. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a lovely poem and I can relate to it so well, finding someone who cares enough to help you break free. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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