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Teen Poetry #2

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TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

0 posted 1999-11-07 02:16 PM

(I was angry and frustrated when I wrote this, so it might not make any sence to some)

All these feelings,
locked up inside.
Nowhere to run,
nowhere to hide.
When I turn around
it's there to haunt me,
remind me of what I want to
but never can be.
I fall and I get up,
I stay strong and never give up
but it's not enough,
not enough to play tough.
Cause when I fall, I fall hard.
Sometimes I get hurt real bad.
No time for tears,
no time to be sad.
Life goes on
so I carry on.
With a scar to remind me,
of these feelings
I'll never be free.
There is things I want to replace
but some things are with me for always.

Laura Mitchell
Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238

1 posted 1999-11-07 02:22 PM

I think you need to take some time for yourself. Your life is coming to you quicker than you can handle. Take some time off from your life's worries, and enjoy yourself!

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

2 posted 1999-11-07 02:28 PM

Thank you Laura for that advice, I appreciate it.

Thanks again.

Laura Mitchell
Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238

3 posted 1999-11-07 02:29 PM

Your welcome. I hope it helps.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

4 posted 1999-11-07 08:53 PM

This poem is very true of life itself. Hang in there.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

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