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I Love You Because
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Ben Singleton Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 18 |
I love you because Your pretty and smart You'll allways be there Deep down in my heart. I love you because Your allways there for me When things couldn't get worse And I wish it was a dream When my world clouds over And it begins to rain Everyones on my back And i'm going insane You'll pull through for me Like you allways do And show a love I see That I know is true. I love you because God knows where i'd be If we wasn't together You wouldn't know me But god realised that When he looked down from above Put us two together So I had someone to love. So thank you god For helping me Show Joanne I love her I hope she sees. |
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HCwildchild Member
since 1999-09-03
Posts 55Pennsylvania,USA |
All I can say to a poem like this is, awwww hehe, that is too sweet  it sounds like you two are a great couple definitely don't be afraid to tell her what you're feeling, and even show her poems like this, because I know I love it when my boyfriend does the same. That was one of the sweetest poems I've read in a long time, keep up the good work  Heather C. |
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Ben Singleton Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 18 |
I really like to hear people appreciate poems that i write down when i get the emotion to do so. Thanks for you're insight. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Ben! Thats beautiful. Sincerely A_L |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Ben! Thats beautiful. Sincerely A_L |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful poem. I'm sure she'll know how much you care if she sees this! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Karen Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 36Utah |
so sweet. I love how you brought God into it in the last part. He truly does know what we need, and he will send us that angel to pick us up. I know that he sent me mine. Thanks for the sweet poem. Karen |
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Ben Singleton Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 18 |
Thank all of you for your insight. You all mean so much to me. |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
ahhh, finally a poem about love that is not sad! This poem is inspiring to me. The next poem I write will be positive, not negative, just for change Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Mike's_Hot_LiL_Angel New Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 2 |
I think your poem was just so totally sweet! trust me u have some serious talent ...and u should really consider showing your lady this poem! major props! |
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snowgirl17 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 20Cloquet,Mn |
Wow i wish my boyfriend got the clue that you have it reminds me of a poem he wrote to me on our first month anervisery....I get how you feel...mabey Lane C. |
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