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life is good
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life is good |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
I take a deep breath and feel the cool air in my lungs I feel the warm breeze on my face the sun just heading over the horizon it feels good to be alive life is so good now living out every day to the fullest enjoying every day looking forward to feeling the sun against my face the mountains in the distance brings a feeling of peace the moon is in sight now it's light shimmers across the still lake the sounds of the loons the chirping of the crickets the smell of the cool air the sounds of the trees swaying I take a deep breath and feel a sense of relaxation all throughout me life is so good out here I feel like I've found myself this is who I really am and this is what I want for the rest of my life I want my life to feel this good forever. |
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Carly Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 17Michigan, USA |
I really liked this poem!! I can feel like I'm actually there. Life is good indeed! Keep it up. ~Carly |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks Carly, I'm glad you could find this place while you read it. I hope to hear from you again!!!!smiles  poe  |
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