Teen Poetry #2 |
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To Kevin Cling a great stortyteller |
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snowgirl17 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 20Cloquet,Mn |
TO KEVIN CLING WHO RECENTLY DID A WORKSHOP AT OUR SCHOOL... YOU TOLD US A STORY AND OH HOW WE GIGGLE THE ONE ABOUT THE LIGHTING AND HOW YOU JIGGLED ALSO YOU SAID THE TWINS GAME WAS FUN BUT IT WAS NOTHING COMPARED TO THE ONE ABOUT THE SUN WE LAUGH AND LAUGH AND SO DID YOU EVEN THE DOG WAS IN THERE TOO.. BUT WHEN WE BEGAN SHARED OUR GRIEF YOU LISTEN WITH A HEART AND WITH OUT RELIF YOU UNDERSTOOD THE WORDS WE SAID. AND RELEAVED THEM WITH A STORY YOU READ. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Sounds like it was a fun workshop. I liked the use of rhyme in your poem. ~~nice writing snowgirl17~~~ |
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