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TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

0 posted 2000-05-05 07:24 PM

Tomorrow is a dream,
a dream about how things are going to be,
a dream about how I see things, people,
a dream about what things mean to me.

In my dream about tomorrow
life will be easy and there are no fears,
there is no jelousy, no spite and no hate,
only happiness and laughter and no tears.

In my dream about tomorrow
there is no blood on the streets of our lifes,
gangsters will walk and in and, caring,
and that would ne why the crimerate takes dives.

In my dream about tomorrow
trees will be free to grow,
animals have the right of te road
and te seed of love will be sowed.

In my dream about tomorrow
you and I never had a fight,
we didn't say all those things we didn't mean,
you never said bye, things are all right.

But my dreams is a dream
and it shatters with tomorrow's light,
and it starts from the begining again.
Will I stop? I just as well might!

heatherbear
Junior Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 48

1 posted 2000-05-05 08:35 PM

Hey Tears! I really like your poem and i completely understand how you feel!! Just dont give up things'll get better dont worry!!!

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

2 posted 2000-05-05 09:21 PM

Thanks heatherbear, thanks for the advice as well. We are all in the habit of wanting to give up when things don't come as easy as we would like it to, when instead we should be sticking to the fight. But sometimes that is easier said than done.

Thanks again

Karen
Junior Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 36
Utah

3 posted 2000-05-06 12:36 PM

I loved it! It gave me a feeling that there is somewhere a Utopia where things will go right. Hey, we make life what it is. And all things start with dreams.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2000-05-06 09:07 PM

~Tears of Pearls~
(by the way I love your user name)

A great piece, creative and flowed very well.
If only tomorrow could be as beautiful and perfect as you have described it to be.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

5 posted 2000-05-07 01:52 AM

Thanks Melissa and Karen, I appreciate your insight on my poem (and username

)

Thanks a mil

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

6 posted 2000-05-07 11:13 PM

A very noble and beautiful dream you have, Tears of Pearls. I agree, do not give up on that dream.

*Krista Knutson*

"Lonliness is the human condition."
*Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"*

Rachel8383
Junior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 44

7 posted 2000-05-07 11:34 PM

they're right, you should never give up on a dream, for when you let a dream fade, you forget what it was. this was great, keep up the great work. i wish life was like you described it. rachel

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