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Teen Poetry #2
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sKiTtLeS
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
0 posted 2000-05-03 11:36 AM


Wanting you, but not needing heartache.
Needing you, but not wanting the hurt.
Searching your soul with all that I am,
Only to find hidden secrets.

Loving you, but not receiving affection.
Hurting me, and you don't even know.
Breaking what is left of my ravaged heart,
There is nothing I can do.

 sKiTtLeS~
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curlyboo
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 4
keokuk, Iowa, USA
1 posted 2000-05-03 12:02 PM

this poem is AWESOME. its short and sweet, but it says sooooo much.   i felt the same way about a guy i was with.  keep writing poems. they are really good!!!!!
sKiTtLeS
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
2 posted 2000-05-04 01:15 PM

Thanks curlyboo!  
It bites to feel like this, and now I know I'm not alone.
You better keep up the good writing, too! :>


 sKiTtLeS~
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