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What difference does it make?
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
this world is no place for me what difference does it make if i go to school tommorow if i get good sleep tonight will it effect my future what does it hold for me some job, proffession, retirement death could be seconds away what difference does it make if I am a lawyer, or a teacher a police man, or a killer maybe i dont care what happens so why try in life, why live for death i am being shaped by the world around me why sleep tonight...... why wake tommorow....... what difference will it make this is what has become of me Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
you make a good point. often i have thought like this. this is what has become of many people today. i say that were only for a short while, so lets just enjoy what we can of it. |
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Barelybreathing Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 46 |
yeah..you got a good point..Tell me if I'm wrong but did you use to post in the old blue forum? Sorry if I got the wrong guy.. ~sami~ 'The greatest thing in the world is to know how to be one's own.' ~Montaigne~ |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
aye I did used to post there. The people there didnt like me so much though  Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Elkgirl01 New Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 3Centerville, OH, USA |
This is what also has become of me. I really identify with this poem right now, but I'm slowly learning to make things meaningful in my life again. Great poem! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
hmm let me see....What difference does it make? It makes the difference of doing something with the little bit of time we have on this planet. It is about goals and dreams and purpose. If life were supposed to be one big party, why do we have brains? We must use them to explore and enjoy and discover. Without learning we are nothing. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
I have felt this way on many occasions Perhaps you are right. But this is a thing of many sides. I wont try to argue that the world is a good place. Its not at any rate. But nothing says we must suffer through it. I hate to remind myself of this little truism, but life is what you make it. Love or hate, sorrow or joy. So don’t go through life miserable, there is always a way out. Life is yours, but you must grip it with both hands. And as for school, grit you teeth and give the system hell! |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
I know I've felt like this many times, but don't let the world win. Keep on going!!!!!! |
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brendon2k Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 38none |
I really enjoyed your poem, it has good meaning to it and i can relate to it. "so why try in life, why live for death, i am being shaped by the world around me". Love it |
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