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Laura Mitchell
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since 1999-11-05
Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238

0 posted 1999-11-06 10:51 AM


True friends may seem very rare,
but that doesn't mean they aren't there.
If you search the correct way.
You can meet a true friend everyday.

Not every friend that you meet is true,
and willing to share everything with you.
You just need to know which friends are right,
and your relationships will form quite tight.

A true friend is willing to help you out,
in times that you just want to pout.
They help you out when you're feeling down,
and make a smile from a frown.

They help you to find who you are,
and make your life improve by far.
A true friend always does what is right,
and never tries to cause a fight.

Everyone has at least one true friend.
Just make sure that you don't cause your friendship to end.
True friends may seem rare,
but believe me they are there.

© Copyright 1999 Laura Mitchell - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
1 posted 2000-03-03 12:30 PM


Nice Job!
Friends are rare
and they say most people
only find about 5 True friends
their whole life!
You are already very blessed
and I can read you know this.

devil_tongue
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since 2000-03-02
Posts 50

2 posted 2000-03-03 04:43 AM


Nice work. I agree that true friends are rare that is why it is important to hang onto the real ones that you have got.
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-03-03 05:30 AM


You can have quite a few friends, many in fact but only a couple of true friends that will be with you throughout everything in your life, the good and the bad. It can take a long time to work out who your true friends are but eventually you know you're left with the best friends in the whole world the one or if you're lucky the two or three that are still by your side when you're an adult...Nice poem, great job  

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Laura Mitchell
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since 1999-11-05
Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238
4 posted 2000-03-03 03:58 PM


Thank you everybody! I love to read good notes.
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