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sweet lover of mine
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sweet lover of mine |
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lost soul Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 20 |
Like a hot summers day your heat penetrates through me Your lips send chills through deep into my soul you whisper sweet nothings in my ear and i am thankful you are here i'll take you away i'll kiss your eyes when you sleep will go deep into the core of passion we will be together till the day the world is no more and even then wwe will be in the beautiful heavens under gods glory we will rejoice my sweet lover |
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heaven_legih_angel New Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 9 |
This is wonderful..keep up the good work |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
magnifiscent display of desire and fantasy! your poem arouses intense feelings of primal desire, desire for the intamacy that can only be shared between lovers. it also induces vivid thoughts of sheer ecstacy in the depths of my imagination: a wonderful portrait of indescribable beauty. great work on this one. |
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Barelybreathing Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 46 |
This is truly beautiful. Good work. I think I'll send a copy of it to my b/f. ~sami~ 'The greatest thing in the world is to know how to be one's own.' ~Montaigne~ |
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