how can you say you love me?

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Teen Poetry #2

how can you say you love me?

lost soul
Junior Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 20

0 posted 2000-05-01 06:24 PM

How can you say you love?
when you gave me up without thinking about me,
you gave me to strangers who abused so bad,
you try to make it up to me by giving me money and things,
but the pain cant go away by getting a diomand ring,
someday I might be able to forgive you,
but that day is not near,
How can you say you love me when you arent even here?

son of man
Member

since 2000-04-25

Posts 125

1 posted 2000-05-02 12:02 PM

i am moved with compassion by your words.
your poetry is so sad...
i understand the word love is tossed about as if it were made of steel.
indeed, it isn't, but it is fragile.
many people don't understand the true meaning of love. love is so much more than just a feeling. feelings that get hurt heal, feelings that flare up die down,
but true love does not fade nor change. it endures til the end.
i hope you find true love, and be healed of your heartbreak. good work on this poetic expression.

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