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Life's The Same 'Ol Jumble
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Life's The Same 'Ol Jumble |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Why did he have to take everything and leave? The meanings of my heart are deep within Which means I don’t wear my heart on my sleeve I feel like it’s been torn in two by the slice of a pin Lately everything reminds me of him Now all I want to do is forget the past year When he appears in my mind everything around me goes dim I can’t take it anymore, I HATE this fear My head is in a jumble I can’t concentrate on anything All I want is peace and to be humble But the people in my life never stay long enough to mean something (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
I feel your pain hun, I know what it's like feeling like everyone close to you always ends up leaving you. You just have to keep your head up high and stick it out. You'll get through it because your strong enough. Keep smiling. excellent poem!!!!!  poe  |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
great poem, you are using that natural talent aren't you? along with hard earned experience and emotion of course. i can relate, im sure many can. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Your poem embodies a question I asked myself plenty times until I read an fw from one of my Passions friends. I'd like to email it to you so I will post this and do so if(which I can't remember) your email address is visible. If not I'll post it here! Lovely poem btw. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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