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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~

0 posted 2000-05-01 11:44 AM

Why did he have to take everything and leave?
The meanings of my heart are deep within
Which means I don’t wear my heart on my sleeve
I feel like it’s been torn in two by the slice of a pin

Lately everything reminds me of him
Now all I want to do is forget the past year
When he appears in my mind everything around me goes dim
I can’t take it anymore, I HATE this fear

My head is in a jumble
I can’t concentrate on anything
All I want is peace and to be humble
But the people in my life never stay long enough to mean something

"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

© Copyright 2000 Stephani Ann - All Rights Reserved
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
1 posted 2000-05-01 03:33 PM

I feel your pain hun, I know what it's like feeling like everyone close to you always ends up leaving you. You just have to keep your head up high and stick it out. You'll get through it because your strong enough. Keep smiling. excellent poem!!!!! poe
son of man
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125

2 posted 2000-05-02 03:34 AM

great poem, you are using that natural talent aren't you? along with hard earned experience and emotion of course. i can  relate, im sure many can.


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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-05-03 09:57 AM

Your poem embodies a question I asked myself plenty times until I read an fw from one of my Passions friends. I'd like to email it to you so I will post this and do so if(which I can't remember) your email address is visible. If not I'll post it here! Lovely poem btw.

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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