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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
I hide behind all my smiles holding back all the tears I try not to show my sad emotions I feel like I can't go on I feel like I have nothing I'm lost in all my pain I can't laugh anymore I only cry inside I feel so un-loved I can't survive without you by my side I feel so empty without your loving words Its been months since you've said 'I love you' it's been weeks since you've hugged me I need your love to keep me going I'm so lost is my dispare I can't find my way out of the darkness that wraps around me I can't smile no more because your not there I only feel pain inside me because I miss you I cry every day I hide my feelings everytime I hear your name you use to be a part of me now that you've left me I'am nothing My meaning in life is now gone you've taken away my happiness come back to me make me smile again Be there for me never leave me again in the darkness I miss you so much I miss you too much show me that you care one more time come back to me dear friend. |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
touching man. you must have been completely in love with this person. i'll bet you feel like an idiot now. i mean i know the feelin'. good expression. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Just let go... Let it flow, let it flow, let it flow... This is a sad and beautiful poem. Don't kick yourself too much though... Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Ditto... very well said (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks guys for your replys. I'm glad you all liked this poem. thanks again!!!!smiles poe    |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
I'll tell you, nothing burns like teenage love...ouch man. Dont think this shallow or cold, but if it was ment to be, she'll come back, if not...there are plenty of fish in the ocean, dont spend your time mourning the one that got away. |
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brendon2k Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 38none |
I really enjoyed your poem, and can honestly relate to it. Love is a difficult and confusing thing, i liked very much how you worded this poem. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Poe! I've felt it. It'll confuse you so much but someday you'll find it. Sincerely A_L |
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