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Teen Poetry #2

Good Bye Kiss

JJ
New Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 6
AZ

0 posted 1999-11-05 08:52 PM

This is just a poem I wrote in about 5 seconds after I broke up with a really great guy.
I didn't realize it,
Not til you were gone,
How much fun I had with you
And how sad I am that you're gone,
I know you'll never read this,
And you'll never care,
But it means just that much to know that you were there.
I didn't know I'd miss you,
Until I woke up and you were gone,
I know this was your first,
And I knew it wouldn't last,
But all the same I wish you'd stayed,
Because my heart's shattering like glass.
So I ask you a simple favor,
Just for one last good bye kiss.

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A. Nony Mouse

Star Fairy 2
Member

since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

1 posted 1999-11-05 11:02 PM

quick and to the point.. i like i like

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-11-05 11:24 PM

This is so sad...

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

Laura Mitchell
Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238

3 posted 1999-11-07 02:25 PM

I hope you are able to get that last good bye kiss.

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