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Jimmy Junior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 42Oak Grove |
As soon I get there and I walk in, I get a look like I have commited a sin. What is it so bad that I have done to you, I can see right now you saying "you two are through." All I ask for is to have your trust, 'cause being with your daughter is just a must. I know when you hear this you will not believe me, Give me a chance, and soon you will see. You don't have to tell me, you already made it clear, When it comes to her, you dont want me near. I dont understand your hatered, why you dislike me so bad, But to tell the truth, witout her, i'll be lonely and sad. Three years is not much of a time, you make it seem like it's just a crime. |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Nicely done, you have really put your feelings about a difficult situation down very well. I hope everything works out! |
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