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My fight
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My fight |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
In my life I have seen much pain, Pain and suffering beyond belife. Why must the issoniate pay with their lives, While and murdest scum run ramptied in the city streets. Fight is what they tell me, To bring a happier world just fight, I have been fighting all my life, It have brought me nothing but sadness Fight for what you belive in, I belive in God, His son died without fighting. We want to be like God but something stops us It is that old snake in the grass. He is the reason why I fight, So when I have a son, His future will not be to die I issonate man. How much longer do I to fight, For my strength is the oly thing I have left For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this poem really gets the cogs of thought moving. i like this...i actually like this alot...i think there are a couple of typos there...but still....the poem is very strong great work  Bec i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known? i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all i took my time, i hurried up the choice was mine i didn't think enough I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone I never conquered, rarely came 16 just held such better days Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside The world was wide, too late to try The tour was over i'd survived I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again You'll close it off, board it up Remember the time i spilled the cup Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault I never conquered, rarely came But tomorrow holds such better days Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside The world was wide, the time goes by The tour is over, i've survived I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone 'Adam's Song' Blink 182 |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
yes I know that no matter how hard I try it wil never be a perfect work I can write poems yet to many typoes For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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RachieChicken New Member
since 2000-04-27
Posts 5 |
I believe this too. I really like your work. This is a great poem you have written and I think that there are a lot of people in this world that need to read it. GOOD JOB. *Rachie* |
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