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Rachel8383 Junior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 44 |
There is this amazing feeling everytime you walk in the door. My heart drops to my knees, then plummets through the floor. There is no word for what I feel. I can't even begin to describe it. You belong in my life, my world. In your arms I perfectly fit. There is only one thing I hate. And that is the word "Goodbye." You say it when I need you most and this I wonder why. You leave me when I need a hug, a kiss, a warm embrace. You leave me with your gentle smile that lights up your whole face. I hate the fact you have to leave, I won't get to see you any more. But I know I'll get that same ol' feeling next time you walk in the door. (I wrote this for the love of my life. Everytime I see his smiling face he makes the clouds in my life disappear. I don't know what I'd do without him.) |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
hmmm... i get it. feelings that strong huh? well, i feel ya. great poem! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I deleted the other copies of this poem as you requested in your e-mail. I know this is a quiche but it is also very true. Tis better to have loved and lost then to never have loved at all. You now know the feeling and you never know....it may come back to you in time. Hang on to the happy memories for they will see you through.  Well done. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Rachel8383, this is nice writing. Good use of rhyme~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~well done~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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