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Loves Blindness |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Why are you so blind? Why can't you just see? You make me cry and feel so bad Why are you doing this to me? You have put me in a bind Where I am captured and can't get out You make me oh so mad Why can't you remember what I am all about? My soul remembers your feel But the feeling in my heart is such, That even though I despair I miss your soft and gentle touch Even now, this pain is so real I release you on the wings of a dove I am so hurt and my heart cries Just remember you were my first love ***Thanks again Maitay & Majestic!!! (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Very lovely poem. Makes me sad tho, just the thought of lossing my love saddens me.... Ah, but that is rude to say. It is a very nice poem, well written, nice flow. Heehee, and a very popular topic with me right now (love poems have been almost ALL I've done). Anyway, keep up the good work. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a sad but lovely poem (if that makes any sense). It was nicely written and you have described the emotions well. ~AF~ [This message has been edited by anonymousfemale (edited 04-26-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~~~~~~nice writing~~~~~~~~ you have a talented pen ~~~~~~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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