|Teen Poetry #2
since 2000-01-19Posts 194
Why are you so blind?
Why can't you just see?
You make me cry and feel so bad
Why are you doing this to me?
You have put me in a bind
Where I am captured and can't get out
You make me oh so mad
Why can't you remember what I am all about?
My soul remembers your feel
But the feeling in my heart is such,
That even though I despair
I miss your soft and gentle touch
Even now, this pain is so real
I release you on the wings of a dove
I am so hurt and my heart cries
Just remember you were my first love
***Thanks again Maitay & Majestic!!!
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."
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since 2000-03-09Posts 522
Very lovely poem. Makes me sad tho, just the thought of lossing my love saddens me.... Ah, but that is rude to say. It is a very nice poem, well written, nice flow. Heehee, and a very popular topic with me right now (love poems have been almost ALL I've done). Anyway, keep up the good work.
"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.
Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
since 2000-02-02Posts 2797
This is a sad but lovely poem (if that makes any sense). It was nicely written and you have described the emotions well.
[This message has been edited by anonymousfemale (edited 04-26-2000).]
since 2000-01-15Posts 2034
you have a talented pen
A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
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