Teen Poetry #2 |
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To Be Loved By You |
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chollagrl4 Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 65brick |
To gaze into your eyes, your love would be so true. How I wish to be loved by you. To feel your gentle lips, softly kiss away my tears. To be loved by you would take away my fears. To hear you say I love you, and know your words are true, how I wish to be loved by you. To smile and be happy, at your sweet embrace. To see a smile upon your face. To be loved by you, this is a dream to me. To be loved by you, would set my spirit free. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
A lovely tribute to your feelings. |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Lovely....I enjoyed this much....Great poem. ------------------ NOT IN VAIN If I can stop one heart from breaking I shall not live in vain; If I can ease one life from aching, Or cool one pain, Or help one fainting robin Into his nest again, I shall not live in vain. ~Emily Dickinson |
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shyone Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 10 |
Beautiful poem. Sounds like something that everyone can relate to...Especially myself. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Lovely work. This is definitely something a lot of us can relate to. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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eagle Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 39singapore |
I echo all the above views! ![]() Hope to see more. ![]() |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
Like most other people, I can also relate. Don't just stay there admiring the guy--do something about it! You never know, maybe these wishes will become reality ![]() ~Jess~ |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
Very pretty poem.... I can't say anything that hasn't already been said, but it really is good! ![]() ![]() April ...in your eyes, I see my future in an instant, And there it goes, I think I found my best friend... |
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