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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
Beauty When.. The moon yawns as it leaves the night sky to welcome the warmth and light of the sunrise. Accepting its welcome amidst the horizon, a peek of light awakens the sleepy Earth. When.. The piano is played with such passion and soul that the world around it stops, just for a moment, to listen to its majestic sound bring awe to the world. When... A mother , holding her newborn child embracing its delicate body, sings softly into its ear sweet lullabies of love. When... A horse runs free in the wild; with no worries or fears it simply contains the desire to embrace and breath the pure essence of nature and life. When... the sun tucks in Mother Earth for a long night ahead, and a proud Moon enters the night sky- Earth's guardian angel while we sleep. When... I look deep into the heart of the world I almost lose my breath for what I find is beauty, in it's purest form. |
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NorthCaliGirl Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 14Durham, CA, 95938 |
Beautiful!!! |
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Ashiraladoni Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 52Duluth, MN, USA |
Great poem. I really liked how you expressed beauty in all it's forms. From the simple beauty of a musical composition to the beauty and love of a new born, to the beauty of a horse running free. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work ~Ashiraladoni |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is beautiful for lack of a better word to describe this gem!! I love it, truely I do! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
wonderful. truly you posess a rare and intimate understanding of beauty.indescribable, but undenyingly recognizable, beauty is so much more than meets eye. true beauty is seen in the heart, felt in the spirit, and manifest in the mind. your poem is captivating. great work. |
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*Nene* Junior Member
since 2000-03-15
Posts 16 |
you have a lot of talent. there is no word to describe the feelings this poem evokes |
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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
Wow...thanks for all the positive support! I love this poem, and am glad that so many of you do, too.  )~Rachel~ |
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rachella Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 39Indiana |
Thank you for reminding us that beauty is all around. We get so busy with life we forget to look and see life. This was wonderful. Thanks again. ~Rachella |
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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
Yes, we tend to get wrapped up in life's worries and sometimes we need a little reminder of what life is really all about. ) |
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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
Yes, we tend to get wrapped up in life's worries and sometimes we need a little reminder of what life is really all about. )~*Yesterday is gone, let go of the past; tommorrow will bring new hope to grasp*~ |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is truly beautiful in a way you've captured the essence of the beauty of a day in the world in which we live. this is great! Bec  i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known? i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all i took my time, i hurried up the choice was mine i didn't think enough I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone I never conquered, rarely came 16 just held such better days Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside The world was wide, too late to try The tour was over i'd survived I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again You'll close it off, board it up Remember the time i spilled the cup Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault I never conquered, rarely came But tomorrow holds such better days Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside The world was wide, the time goes by The tour is over, i've survived I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone 'Adam's Song' Blink 182 |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Reading your poem, now that is beauty! You have such a way with words. Thank you for reminding me not to take life's simple beauties for granted! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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bulletproof2312 Junior Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 28Beaumont Tx, 77707 |
Thank you for reminding us that there is still such wonderful beauty in the world despite the bad things out there. *peace* "Here I stand I can do none other"---Luther |
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