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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478

0 posted 2000-04-25 04:17 PM

There is no on calling
me on the phone.
Everyone is out with
someone else-
their boyfriends,
girlfriends, or close friends.
Where am I in all this mess?
Am I not important?
Or am I just forgotton by all?

~Kristi Lynn

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since 2000-04-23
Posts 119

1 posted 2000-04-25 04:24 PM

I'll bet everyone here can relate to this.   You don't get to be a poet by being more popular then time or good sense allows. Thanks for the read. I like this one.

 "Presently I've had enough of all your sanity." -James Kavanaugh

Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-04-25 04:52 PM

Well.. If I had your number I'd call (that and money for a phone card *ick, work*). Don't worry Kristi, you're very important to me, and I don't think that I'll ever forgett you.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
3 posted 2000-04-26 09:20 AM

*smiles*  Thanx, guys.  It means a lot to me.  I just feel so left out.  It's that way here, at home, and it looks like so many of you here in Passions are in such good relationships.  I'm jealous...
Love ya'll,
Kristi Lynn

since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
4 posted 2000-04-26 12:49 PM

Hon.  you should know  that no matter what I am here for you.  And I always will be.  I told you come with me and I'll hook you up with a great guy, but my phone's the one that doesn't ring.  I told you you're very pretty and if a guy, not saying any names, wants to be a jerk it's his loss not yours.  Besides there's a lot of hotties out there you just gotta get out there and meet them.
Love Ya,

Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-04-26 02:29 PM

You'll never be forgotten...when are ya gonna email me?!?

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 20
6 posted 2000-04-26 03:48 PM

Being popular is not always the best but having someone to share your secerts with is...

since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
7 posted 2000-04-26 03:55 PM

Thank you for being such a sweetie.  You're phone rings~ every time I call you're on the other line...  Usually with James, too...
Anyhoo, I'd rather find someone on my own.  I know the unmentioned name- Grady- and I still hope he'll see past what didn't happen and be friends someday...

I'm soooooooooooooooooo  sorry!!!  I have to find you're e-mail address soon...  I will, I  promise...     

I know that having someone to share secrets with is important.  I used to share them with Jer- one of our moderators- but he's not around much anymore.  I had a few special people other than that here at home, but I dunno anymore.  Like I said, it seems like no one has time or even remembers I exist...

Thanks all, for trying to cheer me up.  

Love ya'll,
Kristi Lynn

since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

8 posted 2000-04-26 04:32 PM

I am currently going through the same thing. Anyway, thanks for the read. E-mail me sometime at Take care ok?

-- Crystal

 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.

son of man
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125

9 posted 2000-04-26 10:45 PM

your poem is a simple statement of reality to me. clearly, it describes your situation, as well as my own. i have my friends as im sure you do. but where are they now? i seem to be overly neglected. i believe there is a higher purpose for souls such as you and i.
a purpose that requires our time and energy.
a purpose that demands and will not allow
us to dedicate our efforts otherwise, as though it were alive and envious, crying "if i cant have you noone can." perhaps one day, all that are left out will realize their destiny
and fulfill it. then will we recognize the
importance of our absence from the time consuming and energy wasting activities partaken of by those of the lesser calling.
are we really forgotten?...

Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
10 posted 2000-04-27 10:34 AM

Kristi Lynn, your not forgotton by your passions friends.  Believe in yourself, you are magic~~~~~~~

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
11 posted 2000-04-27 01:08 PM

Thanx much!  It means a lot that someone's there.  I'm sorry if you're going through the same thing- it sux!

I'm glad that I'm not forgotton by my Passions friends.  I don't know what I'd do...

Son of Man~
Okay, we're not forgotton by God, who has his purposes for us, but for some reason our friends have no time.  I know there is a purpose for me- I just don't know what it is.  Thanx- you're quite an inspiration.

Love ya'll,
Kristi Lynn

since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

12 posted 2000-04-28 07:14 AM

hey Kristi! i won't forget you....i actually haven't been on netpoets for a couple of days....and when i haven't been on for a while i skim down the list first to read poetry by certain people...and in actual fact...swear to God on this...i was skimming down just then searching for your work!
so you are far from unappreciated!

i used to feel how you do...but then i stopped relying on my friends and family to make my life sociable and interesting...i went out by myself...yes litte 'ole me ventured into the big bad world in which i only went into with company...and by myself i met new people, experienced new things and realised all the things i had limited myself to.
as they say  "the world is your oyster"

cheer up and smile <<<SMILEY!



 i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known?
i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all
i took my time, i hurried up
the choice was mine i didn't think enough
I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone
I never conquered, rarely came
16 just held such better days
Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside
The world was wide, too late to try
The tour was over i'd survived
I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone
I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown
Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again
You'll close it off, board it up
Remember the time i spilled the cup
Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault
I never conquered, rarely came
But tomorrow holds such better days
Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside
The world was wide, the time goes by
The tour is over, i've survived
I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone

'Adam's Song'
Blink 182

since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
13 posted 2000-04-28 01:47 PM

I'm glad to know that my friends in Passions here still care.  
Anyhoo, I know what you mean by the whole relying on friends and family for making life sociable... I went out on my own, too, and did good...  Now it's back to no one.  I'm working on it, but it's hard.  Thanx for your reply!  
Love ya,
Kristi Lynn

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