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UndyingLove Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 23Bethany, OK, USA |
Share You share your laughter, You share your tears. You share your joys, You share your fears. You share your smile, You share your touch. You share your love, You share so much. In all you do, In all you say, You share your love In every way. You share with me All that you do. I want to share My all with you. "Goodnight, sweet prince, and flights of angels guide thee to thy rest." -William Shakespeare, in "Hamlet" |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful! Welcome to Passions.  Heartfelt, lovely verse here. Keep it up! *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is such a gorgeous piece i like how you conclude the poem with "i want to share my all with you" very sincere Welcome to Passions! keep up the great poems Bec "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together" |
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Go0fYdUcK Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 28CA |
you have a really awesome poem! welcome to Passions! im new also! *KhAnH-eLySe* |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Welcome to passions Undying Love. This is a nice poem in which you have entered with. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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