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UndyingLove
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since 2000-04-24
Posts 23
Bethany, OK, USA

0 posted 2000-04-24 09:43 PM


Share

You share your laughter,
You share your tears.

You share your joys,
You share your fears.

You share your smile,
You share your touch.

You share your love,
You share so much.

In all you do,
In all you say,

You share your love
In every way.

You share with me
All that you do.

I want to share
My all with you.


 "Goodnight, sweet prince, and flights of angels guide thee to thy rest."
-William Shakespeare, in "Hamlet"

© Copyright 2000 Amy McPherson - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 2000-04-24 10:16 PM


Beautiful!  Welcome to Passions.    Heartfelt, lovely verse here.  Keep it up!

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~

4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

2 posted 2000-04-24 11:01 PM


this is such a gorgeous piece
i like how you conclude the poem with
"i want to share my all with you"
very sincere

Welcome to Passions!
keep up the great poems

Bec

 "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together"


Go0fYdUcK
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 28
CA
3 posted 2000-04-25 04:26 AM


you have a really awesome poem! welcome to Passions! im new also!  

 *KhAnH-eLySe*

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
4 posted 2000-04-25 06:57 AM


Welcome to passions Undying Love. This is a nice poem in which you have entered with. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

~AF~

 "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry


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