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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
"I Love You" I didn't mean to say it! It just slipped out, I swear. I would give anything to take it back And escape that aching stare. I seems I say it now More than when we were together I couldn't admit it then But you always knew Now I say it so carelessly and I can see the hurt in your eyes Your eyes don't lie, They never did, neither did mine. Even if I never open my mouth again, It will be written all over my face. And deep down in my eyes, you'll see What I never told you. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a sad piece but unfortunatly these things happen with that dreaded 'L' word. I hope that everything works out for you. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
ohh, that is a sad poem. yes, "love" is a tricky word, you have to know when to say it, who to say it to, and worse, when NOT to say it.... nice poem tho. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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rachella Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 39Indiana |
Thank you for this. It's real bittersweet though. Finding love is wonderful, but I'm sorry this was the ending. There will be a day when "love" will roll off your tounge and it will reply back "me too". Thanks again. ~rachella |
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UndyingLove Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 23Bethany, OK, USA |
I can relate to this. I haven't told the one that I love that I love him, but I can say I am scared of the "aching stare" and, thus, cannot say that I love him. Nice poem, though. "Goodnight, sweet prince, and flights of angels guide thee to thy rest." -William Shakespeare, in "Hamlet" |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
wow...this is a sad poem  i have told the one i love that i love them...and thankfully they felt the same way. but i was always scared of saying it and scaring him away  nice poem Bec "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together" |
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luvable New Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 9 |
I know where you are coming from! You can never tell when to say I love you to anyone! |
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MrHat Junior Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 34Gilroy, Ca |
I like this poem. It is very nice. I hope you keep writing. I think this poem is good because it rings true for so many people. "DO NO GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT" Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rave at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Though wise men and their end know dark is right, Because their words had forked no lightning they Do not go gentle into that good night. Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Wild men who caught the sun in flight, And learn too late, they grieved it on its way, Do not go gentle into that good night. Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. And you, my father, there on that sad height, Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray. Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light. -Dylan Thomas |
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huney_mel Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 52 |
This is so sad, real and sad. Its sad cause the one i love, isnt in my reach and i miss him so deeply. Love mel  ( |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
what is true love? how do you find it? |
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