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ABubblesB15
New Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 5
Chico, CA, USA

0 posted 2000-04-23 08:47 PM


The One

I never thought you would be the one,
I thought it would be another.

You came into my life as a lover of a friend,
As only a friend.

But as days went by,
Everything changed.

As our relationship grew stronger,
Yours and hers grew weaker.

As your feelings grew stronger for me and mine for you,
They grew weaker for her.

I felt I was taking you away from her,
I thought she would hate me,
But at that time nothing mattered.

I may have lost a strong friendship with her,
But in the end found a stronger one with you.

I have now realized you were the one,
And that it wasn’t another.




 

© Copyright 2000 Ashley - All Rights Reserved
MerritW
Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33
Texas
1 posted 2000-04-23 09:25 PM


Wow!  That's really good.  I know where you're comming from on that one.  Good job!!

 *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend)

Blue Rose
Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 18
Vernonia OR USA
2 posted 2000-04-24 05:11 PM


That was really good!  I've been in that situation before and I hope your ends better than mine.  Lets just say I lost 2 friends instead of one. Anyway good luck with your writing in the future!
DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
3 posted 2000-04-24 06:04 PM


First off, I'd like to welcome you to passions, secondly, I'd like to say that this is a very nice poem. Hope to see more from you.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

DaZeD&cOnFuSeD
Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 32

4 posted 2000-04-24 07:00 PM


Great work!! Only the situation thing sounds tuff... I would not wanna choose between a guy and a friend....
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dana

Jer
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
5 posted 2000-04-24 08:35 PM


Good job and Welcome to Passions. I know of the situation you talk of. I have been through it before. In all, great job and hope to see more it time.

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler


Dave Cotterill
New Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 2
Truro, Nova Scotia, Canada
6 posted 2000-04-24 08:35 PM


That's so crazy...
I'm in this exact some situation right now.
That's a really cool poem.

UndyingLove
Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 23
Bethany, OK, USA
7 posted 2000-04-24 09:45 PM


Good poem! I am dealing with that right now, too!

 "Goodnight, sweet prince, and flights of angels guide thee to thy rest."
-William Shakespeare, in "Hamlet"

4eva_at_heart
Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

8 posted 2000-04-25 01:11 AM


WElcome to Passions! and you enetered with a really sweet poem....but....i don't know if i would pass on a friend for a love interest...or maybe i dunno....never been in that situation

Bec

 "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together"


luvable
New Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 9

9 posted 2000-04-25 03:10 PM


That is a wonderful poem! I know what you are going through! Keep up the good work!!
Ashiraladoni
Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 52
Duluth, MN, USA
10 posted 2000-04-25 09:14 PM


Great poem, and I know how you feel on this topic. But remember be honest about everything. Don't try to hide anything from the guy or your friend. Keep up the good work!!!

~Ashiraladoni

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