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NorthCaliGirl Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 14Durham, CA, 95938 |
To my sweet, all the things I never said. All those little things, that filled my heart with dread. I was never able to tell you, all the emotions that I felt. All the feelings that I held inside, those with which I had dealt. The longing on those cold nights, to have your arms around me tight. And to see your tender eyes, the ones I love and are my prize. The kiss from your gentle lips, oh, the thing I made myself miss! Your loving caress, ... I swear I tried my best. Those words I could not form, those words I keep with such regret, still linger in my throat simply unable to form, but I don’t fret. I know that somewhere, somewhere deep inside, my heart has met with yours, and they cling together with uttermost pride. |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Wonderful poem. [This message has been edited by **Angel** (edited 04-23-2000).] |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Great poem..I really enjoyed it. I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to Passions! |
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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
I know the feeling, sometimes I can't say something even if I want it to say so bad, and sometimes it is to late to say it natalie... |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
ack! i always have things to say...buti hold them back till it is too late and the opportunity has passed  just a little piece of advice....more recently i have started saying things on my mind...and with whom you share...they will always return it with a locked up thought of their own...and sometimes their inner thoughts help to sort out your own  keep up the great posting Bec "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together" |
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Ben Singleton Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 18 |
Great poem, I have had that trouble in the past and it's a pain in the **** |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Northcaligirl! Its something I feel. Hold on to it. Its so sweet even in its ambiguity but be true. Someday you'll say those beautiful words. ((((((((hugs))))))))))) A_L |
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*~Juliet~* Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 19Key West |
I know those feelings all too well, also. It's horrible, but it passes. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Yeah, i know just whatcha mean.. I often don't say what is on my mind, just in case it sounds silly, or doesn't come out right.. u know, i think bec has some good advice there.. hehe, i might use it myself. *_^ well done, a lovely poem, very well described feelings... Lynne |
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Karen Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 36Utah |
Beautiful poem. My favorite line was, "oh, the thing I made myself miss!" Sometimes we make ourselves feel something simply because we want to. It's a way that we cope with the circumstances that surround us every day. Keep up the good work! |
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