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How Can This Be? |
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Dave Cotterill New Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 2Truro, Nova Scotia, Canada |
How can this be? That the one who holds me together is tearing me apart The one i always turn to when i expose my heart How can this be? That my feelings are so clear and yet I can't understand I just want her here with me to hold my shaking hand How can this be? That the feelings I have for her I pray she has for me I only wish she knew to set my heart and soul free The words i wish to tell her Please god explain to me Why is it so difficult How can this be? |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
How can this be? It can be alright...I'll leave it to the rest of the teen poets to explain!! Great poem! Welcome to Passions, may your stay be a joyful one. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
There are so many questions, but so few answers. How could it be? Well...to tell the truth, I don't know, who does? What I'm trying to say is that everything is this life happens for a reason, we might not understand what that reason is, even if we want to understand real badly, we just weren't supposed to understand. We should make peace with the fact that life won't always go the way we plan it, or want it to be. I think this is a good poem. Keep on writing. |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
This is a great poem! I hope your question is answered and a little sunshine is brought your way. Welcome to Passions! |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
very nice poem, well written. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
I don't think anyone can answer this question, but you'll find the answer later on natalie... |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This question is one that I know that each and everyone of us will ask ourselves sometime in our lifes. Unfortunatly, the only person who can answer this question is yourself. T.O.P is right in saying that everything happens for a reason and you will find the answer eventually. Otherwise Dave, welcome to passions and a nicely written piece. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
too many questions in the game of love eh?? nice written poem....wish to see more from you soon  Welcome to Passions Bec "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together" |
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snowgirl17 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 20Cloquet,Mn |
I am sorry the game of love has got you down...I think about if the person that I liked even cares about me. But i rember if they don't then it was not ment to be... and if he comes back to me then wonderful.. it was ment to be. I gusse I agree from a previous post that said "things happen for a reason" Like when my best friend died 3 years ago... we do not know why we can only have faith that she was needed for some reason. Even if it is just a break up it happened because there is obviosly someone a lot better for yo in the sea. Mabey you don't think so but I sure there is.... Hope is on your side.... |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
Wow! Let me start out by saying I too feel the same way or at least did at one time for another. The words you have written here are so true, and passionate. It's hard to imagion that someone could not find interest in a guy that can express himself so openly through writing. I think that yu should share this with that lucky girl, who knows she could very well feel the same way about you, too. I look forward to reading more of your work. Gina |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
HI Good work! Very similar to my situation. Take it cool and let her free! If she loves you back then its fine otherwise be her guardian angel. Sincerely A_L |
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hopeful Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 27 |
I know what you must feel like I'm going through the same thing to. I am so lost anymore when it comes to things. It is a beautful poem keep up the good work. Bye |
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rachella Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 39Indiana |
Dave, Love is one of the most humbling, confusing, scary, hardest lesons of life. Isn't is great?! This was a very nice poem and welcome to passions. I can't wait to read more. ~Rachella |
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Jimmy Junior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 42Oak Grove |
a very good poem. the words deeply touched me. i can tell they have come from deep inside you. i too know what it feel like. keep up the good poetry. "A Love Found Brings A Smile, But The Lost Lost Only Brings Pain" |
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