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since 2000-03-01
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not heaven nor hell so...

0 posted 2000-04-21 08:31 PM

Your words sound so sad and full of need,
Your emotions twisting inside your crushed heart,
You need to hear something from the one you love,
Something she’s not willing to say.
You fill up your life with words,
Poetry written in the moment pure anger with love,
You’re angry,
But not at her,
You’re angry,
At yourself,
At your love that you can’t help but give to her,
It’s not easy,
It may never be easy again,
But it will get that little bit better,
And that little bit will give you hope,
Hope that they chapter will end soon,
You can start to write a new one,
Continue on with you book of life.
I wish you good luck for the future,
I hope that you will find your peace soon,
You know that she doesn’t deserve you,
Deep in your heart you must know it’s true,
Hold your head high and smile,
It will be ok.

I wrote this poem for one of the members at passions.  I wanted them to know that they are not alone no matter how much they feel like they are.
You may know who you are, you may not.  Never the less, don't give up!  Things do eventually get better.

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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

1 posted 2000-04-22 01:15 AM

i think i have an idea who this member might be and i too would like to extend my best wishes to them. look up at life because there is always something over the horizon


 "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together"

since 2000-01-27
Posts 271

2 posted 2000-04-22 01:20 AM

very nice poem indeed!!  my favorite part was "You’re angry,/But not at her,/You’re/angry,/At yourself,"  That was great.  I'd say more about this poem but words arn't enough for it so i'll just say, awsome.

 There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

Don't worry about people stealing your ideas. If your ideas are any good, you'll have to ram them down people's throats.
-- Howard Aiken

Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 32

3 posted 2000-04-22 03:48 AM

Good work!!
Hope things get better for this person also and for anyone else who feels this way

since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

4 posted 2000-04-22 09:49 AM

This poem is wonderful. I hope the person gets the chance to read it!


Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
5 posted 2000-04-22 12:14 PM

Very nice writing and kind of you to write it for someone!
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