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giving my heart
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giving my heart |
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djfizz New Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 1 |
Here in your hands i give you my heart, to cherish,to love,or maybe tear apart. What you will do with it is only up to you. I just want you to know i will give my love true. I have been hurt in the past,my heart left torn and blue. I no longer let that bother me becouse im in love with you. Maybe one day you will feel the same for me. Untill that day i will be down on one knee. Hoping that my wish will one day be real. You will tell me you love me and know how i feel. |
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Carly Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 17Michigan, USA |
This is a very good poem. I enjoyed it very much! Much luck... ~Carly |
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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
I really liked this poem, it's very cute and romantic. ~Rachel~ |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
Very nice, beautifully done! |
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Rachel8383 Junior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 44 |
Good work!! I liked it very much, and keep it up. Welcome and keep it up! *Rachel* |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Welcome to passions!! Keep writing.. want to see more of your posts here!! ^_^ Lynne  |
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Blue Rose Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 18Vernonia OR USA |
That was great! I'm a beginner at this so I just want to get my name out there in the open. I love to read poetry and I keep print outs of the stuff I like to keep in a booklet. We also like to share poems at our school every couple of weeks. Would it be okay if I shared this one? Let me know. In the mean time, keep up the good work! |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Welcome to Passions!! This is a very sweet first post from you! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
wow, I hope it works out for you, but this poem is very good, it's so sweet natalie... |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Welcome to Passions. What a great first post. I guess your poem made me think of that saying...you can't appreciate real love 'till you've been burned. I'm just wondering how many times you have to be burned...oh well... Good Luck. Love Always, Shell. |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Very sweet poem. Welcome to Passions. I think you'll like it here. I hope to read more of your poetry. Isa "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
firstly Welcome to Passions! and secondly...great poem....it's very beautiful hope to read more of your work soon Bec "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together" |
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DaZeD&cOnFuSeD Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 32 |
That is very good work!! Lucky girl too!! DåzêÐ&CõñfûsëÐ Dana |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Welcome to Passions! This poem is wonderful. I look forward to reading more of your work. Lindsay |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Welcome to passions, this is a very beautiful poem that you've written here. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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