navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #2 » giving my heart
Teen Poetry #2
Post A Reply Post New Topic giving my heart Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
New Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 1

0 posted 2000-04-18 05:03 PM

Here in your hands i give you my heart,

to cherish,to love,or maybe tear apart.

What you will do with it is only up to you.

I just want you to know i will give my love true.

I have been hurt in the past,my heart left torn and blue.

I no longer let that bother me becouse im in love with you.

Maybe one day you will feel the same for me.

Untill that day i will be down on one knee.

Hoping that my wish will one day be real.

You will tell me you love me and know how i feel.

© Copyright 2000 djfizz - All Rights Reserved
Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 17
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2000-04-18 06:36 PM

This is a very good poem. I enjoyed it very much! Much luck...


Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46
Prior Lake, MN, USA
2 posted 2000-04-18 09:57 PM

I really liked this poem, it's very cute and romantic.


since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
3 posted 2000-04-18 10:41 PM

Very nice, beautifully done!      
Junior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 44

4 posted 2000-04-18 10:54 PM

Good work!!  I liked it very much, and keep it up.  Welcome and keep it up!  *Rachel*
Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
5 posted 2000-04-19 12:17 PM

Welcome to passions!! Keep writing.. want to see more of your posts here!! ^_^


Blue Rose
Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 18
Vernonia OR USA
6 posted 2000-04-20 07:38 PM

That was great! I'm a beginner at this so I just want to get my name out there in the open.  I love to read poetry and I keep print outs of the stuff I like to keep in a booklet.  We also like to share poems at our school every couple of weeks.  Would it be okay if I shared this one? Let me know.  In the mean time, keep up the good work!
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
7 posted 2000-04-21 08:16 AM

Welcome to Passions!! This is a very sweet first post from you!

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

since 2000-04-02
Posts 56

8 posted 2000-04-21 08:32 AM

wow, I hope it works out for you,
but this poem is very good, it's so sweet

since 2000-03-01
Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...
9 posted 2000-04-21 11:53 PM

Welcome to Passions.
What a great first post.
I guess your poem made me think of that can't appreciate real love 'till you've been burned.  I'm just wondering how many times you have to be burned...oh well...

Good Luck.

Love Always,

since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
10 posted 2000-04-22 12:46 PM

Very sweet poem. Welcome to Passions. I think you'll like it here. I hope to read more of your poetry.


 "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."

since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

11 posted 2000-04-22 01:01 AM

firstly Welcome to Passions!
and secondly...great's very beautiful

hope to read more of your work soon


 "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together"

Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 32

12 posted 2000-04-22 04:05 AM

That is very good work!!
Lucky girl too!!

since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

13 posted 2000-04-22 09:48 AM

Welcome to Passions! This poem is wonderful.

I look forward to reading more of your work.


Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
14 posted 2000-04-22 10:17 PM

Welcome to passions, this is a very beautiful poem that you've written here.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #2 » giving my heart

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary