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| Teen Poetry #2 |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
here i lay upon a vortex one of swirling emotions and desires my body lies lifeless gagged and bound in mocking turmoil my head is in confusion an overwhelming force compresses my senses i reach to my eyes and feel the warm secretion my lips taste the saltyness of the tears my vulnerable body has been exposed but to the naked eye my peril lay sheathed for the bleeding of my heart is within and the blood runs cold out of sight the emptyness that i clasp in my palm remnants of memories of what was there the quivering of my lonely shoulders they need the shawl of your arms warmth escapes my life beside me where you layed and gave me security the worn space is cold and empty i stroke the pillow upon which your head did rest normality has returned and i claw at the boundaries a longing for the surreal experience we shared with you at my side the world offered hope and love without you the grey reality had returned i'll remember the way you held me in your arms the way in which you kissed me passionately your hand as it stroked my face your smile as we shared the essence of life apart then together, now apart again distance plays a dangerous and heart wrenching game not apart forever may be but what is to become of the heart on display? what is to become of my heart? |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
hey, that is a very well written poem, if a very sad one. I really need to stop reading these things before I go to sleep, now I'm going to be thinking sad thoughts.... ah well, very nice poem. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
so sad, but very well written, natalie... |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
*BUMP*  am i being cheeky in bumping this up to maybe get some more replies?  Bec  "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together" |
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DaZeD&cOnFuSeD Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 32 |
Hey Bec I know who your referring to hehehe Great poem!! She is happy now though cause she is gonna see him again so all relax lol DåzêÐ&CõñfûsëÐ Dana |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
This is so good, but so sad!! Lindsay |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful poem. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oww Bec this is such a sad poem with lots of emotion. 12 weeks isn't it??  EJ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
thanx all!! i am desperately trying to improve my poetry....and i think i may be actually finally gettoing the hang of it Bec "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together" |
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