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GAngel2212
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since 2000-04-15
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0 posted 2000-04-20 05:48 PM


I did not write this poem, but I just thought it would be a great poem to share.  It's very sad and brought tears to my eyes

Mommy went to heaven, but I need her here today,
My tummy hurts and I fell down, I need her right away,
Operator can you tell me how to find her in this book?

Is heaven in the yellow part, I don't know where to look.
Is heaven very far away, is it acorss the sea?
She's been gone a long, long time she needs to come home now!
I really need to reach her, but I simply don't know how.

Help me dine the number please, is it listed under "Heaven"?
I can't read these big, big words, I am only seven.
I'm sorry Operator, I didn't mean to make you cry,
Is your tummy hurting too, or is there something in your eye?

If I call my church maybe they will know.
Mommy said when we need help that's where we should go.
I found the number to my church tacked up on the wall.
Thank you Operator, I'll give them a call.


*( VERY SAD

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AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01
Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...
1 posted 2000-04-20 07:54 PM


Well, it is extremely sad, it brought tears to my eyes as well...I know someone who went through that and that is exactly how they felt!
Thanks for sharing it with us

Carly
Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 17
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2000-04-20 08:15 PM



  I have read this poem many times, and every time it makes me cry... Thanks for posting it.

      ~Carly

hopeful
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 27

3 posted 2000-04-20 11:36 PM


This is a very sad poem. I've read it many times and it brings tears to my eyes every time.
4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

4 posted 2000-04-21 12:03 PM



this is really sad
thank you for posting this....it's a an emotional poem

Bec

GAngel2212
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since 2000-04-15
Posts 21

5 posted 2000-04-21 07:39 AM


I'm glad you all are enjoying this poem!

READ ALL MY OTHERS!!

~GAngel2212~

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
6 posted 2000-04-21 08:13 AM


Sad poem...sweet too.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

natalie
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 56

7 posted 2000-04-21 08:25 AM


very sad, it just is so sad when somebody has to get through such a thing,
it would be a good poem for a funeral or so
natalie...

MerritW
Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33
Texas
8 posted 2000-04-21 02:54 PM


Wow!  That's such a touching poem.  Made me cry.  Thanks for sharing it.

 *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend)

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