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JEBE Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 32WILMINGTON, NC, USA |
Like a forgotten leaf blown away in the wind my mind started to drift nowhere, in all directiond, so fast, at a pause not today i know how much i can lift how high i can climb without climbing to high or falling into pieces my soul whisked already far by dreams today as i write nothing, hardly a thesis a tremble in my heart, i know i am scared not when to discover, but how i already did i'm not here with you , but with myself to lie....so many have hid in dark corners with artificial light they breath what i don't now blown away in the night |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Uhhhh.....maybe I'm slow today but I don't understand. I see contradictions, and confusion-thats it....care to explain this? ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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JEBE Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 32WILMINGTON, NC, USA |
No your not slow...its meant to mean how at one time you can feel so many emotions..i know it doesn't quite make sense..its not really suppose to however you intepret it is what it means ...i guess it just makes you think....sorry i'll do better to clear it up |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I see the confusion and the path the mind has taken to reach the conclusion. I have travelled this path many times in my life. I think you have depicted confusion very well in this.  |
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