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Rachel8383 Junior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 44 |
You left me. You went away. I didn't think I'd see this day. Why did you leave? Where did you go? Are you happy where you are? I hate it that I do not know. Maybe I am crazy to hold on to a memory. Visions keep taunting me, I wish they would let me be. I can't believe you left. Now I am by myself. I will take my faded memory and put it on a shelf. Be gone you, get out of my head. I do not wish to see you when I go to bed. Leave me alone, Leave me be. You chose to leave so get off your bended knee. I want no apologies. I want nothing of you. You chose to leave so now we are through. |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Wow, great writing...this poem is like the story of my life. Very strong with determination..keep up the good work!  sKiTtLeS~ "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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Rachel8383 Junior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 44 |
Thanks! It's a great feeling to have people reply, makes me feel all warm and tingly. true also about the story of my life. |
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Carly Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 17Michigan, USA |
I really liked this. Lots of emotion... very good. Keep it up! ~Carly |
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