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Teen Poetry #2

From You I Learned

sKiTtLeS
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.

0 posted 2000-04-19 01:31 AM

From you I learned to love,
from you I learned to trust.
It was you who taught me to give my heart,
not solely out of lust.

From you I learned the passions,
from you I learned the pain.
It was you who taught me how to fly,
despite the pouring rain.

From you there came the laughter,
from you there came the cries.
It was you who kissed the teardrops,
away from salty eyes.

So...(smiles)

To you I'm always grateful,
for giving me love so true.
And all I know is this:
I'll forever be loving you.

"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
-the words of a friend

Carly
Junior Member

since 2000-04-18

Posts 17
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2000-04-19 11:13 AM

This is avery good poem, I liked it a lot.
Keep writing!

~Carly

sKiTtLeS
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.

2 posted 2000-04-19 04:38 PM

Thanks Carly!

And you don't have to tell me twice to keep writing, I love it.

thanks again,

sKiTtLeS~

"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
-the words of a friend

GAngel2212
Junior Member

since 2000-04-15

Posts 21

3 posted 2000-04-20 05:41 PM

WONDERFUL poem. Keep up the good work. Writing is a WONDERFUL way to express your feelings

)

~GAngel2212~

Blue Rose
Junior Member

since 2000-04-20

Posts 18
Vernonia OR USA

4 posted 2000-04-20 07:21 PM

Wow this is a great poem! I've felt this way before and it is almost beyond words, although you managed to find the right ones. I'm glad to know that I am not the only on e who has ever felt this way. Keep up the good work!

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

5 posted 2000-04-21 11:55 PM

Wow, great poem.
I loved it.

It was really...romantic...I hope that whoever it was for got to read it!!

Love Always,
Shell

DaZeD&cOnFuSeD
Junior Member

since 2000-04-20

Posts 32

6 posted 2000-04-22 04:20 AM

Great poem its sweet!!
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Dana

**Angel**
Member

since 2000-03-31

Posts 162

7 posted 2000-04-22 09:43 AM

This poem is so sweet! I love it.

Keep posting.

Lindsay

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